Kiss, Kiss, Go, Go: Workblog 3

This may have been an instance where I made things worse, rather than better.

Improvement?
I think so. I kind of dig the depth the diffrent paneling creates here, especially with the characters sort of popping out of panel in a few places. Though that said, something I'm trying to change from Ophelia is from over using that effect, to the point where I end up with a book where all of the characters are literally crawling out of the comic.

Of course sometimes the right answer is somewhere in between:
hmmm....